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Autumn Leaves

Autumn in Australia.
I’m on holiday during the lock-down, and out walking through the pathways of dead leaves, I thought of their former glory.
I sought not to let you pass away, so with brush a of gold
I raised you in artful form, lest eyes your beauty forgets

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Carrie OLeary
Carrie OLeary (@carrie-oleary)
8 months ago

Very artistic, Eric. I love walking through the leaves in autumn, especially when they are all crisp and golden, hearing that shushing sound. They truly are an art form in themselves. When the tender parts finally rot away leaving the skeleton behind, they are still a thing of beauty. Lovely!

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo (@lotchie-carmelo)
8 months ago

Wow. You are very artistic, Eric. I love how you made and organize it to be more interesting and inspiring.

Last edited 8 months ago by Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo (@lotchie-carmelo)
8 months ago
Reply to  Eric Radcliffe

You boost my confidence in art. Thank you for inspiring me again.

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Marianna Pieterse
Marianna Pieterse (@marianna-pieterse)
8 months ago

I love the idea of transforming the leaves into art pieces, lest one forgets its beauty.

Daisy Blacklock
Daisy Blacklock (@daisy-blacklock)
8 months ago

Wow! The leaves look beautiful. You are so artistic. The description is almost poetic, great job.

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