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It takes a real talent to tell a story in so few words. What was…
Endure and Sing
Inspirational piece. Am glad you picked the rat to be the protagonist in your story,…
Endure and Sing
Such a sweet tale - and with a good moral to the story. I thought…
Endure and Sing
Wow! This is a good story! Really good to read to little kids, the moral…
Endure and Sing
Hi Katy, it really does add an extra dimension to hear your story read aloud…
Endure and Sing
In my neighboring country Denmark, we have the classical storyteller Hans-Christian Andersen. Your sweet story…
Endure and Sing
A really nice one with a wonderful story line. I can see why this was…
Endure and Sing
A beautiful story! I was reminded of seeing Paul Potts and Susan Boyle on Britain's…
Endure and Sing
Your story inspired me to keep going no matter how discouraging it gets. At times…
Endure and Sing
Thank you so much for the feedback! I pray that the young readers will be…
Endure and Sing
Thank you for taking the time to comment and convey your thoughts on the story.…
Endure and Sing
Hi Katy, don't we all feel like the rat in your story at times! We…
Vows
I must admit it was the picture of the church, with its grave yard, under…
Between Belonging and Dying
A very powerful story, Daniel. Your writing makes it easy to feel the reality of…
Between Belonging and Dying
Oh my gosh, Daniel. Your story really defines the word superb. You make me experience…
Between Belonging and Dying
A horrendous situation, more so because so many people find themselves going through it. A…
Between Belonging and Dying
What an extremely powerful story Daniel, really well written and with an ending that had…
Between Belonging and Dying
Daniel, this story is one of the best flash fiction stories I've ever read. You…
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The Problem with Women
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Hello Tejal. I read this story for the first time in January or February of 2020, when it was shortlisted in ZenGarden.club. Two things stand out from that first reading – the fact that you were in Middle School when you wrote it, and the fact that I cried when I read it. Such sensitivity and superb writing from someone so young made me know that there was indeed hope for the human race! Now today, I saw the story published on Voice.club, and I’m thrilled to be able to tell you that it’s still one of the most beautiful, moving stories I’ve read on these two special sites. I’m so glad you’re now a member of the Voice Club. I’m looking forward to many more of your lovely stories!
Thank you so much! Your words are very motivating and I can’t stop grinning right now. I agree: one thing I love about these two amazing sites is how they remind all of us that there is always and always hope. I look forward to penning down more stories too, as well as reading the ones written by you and our fellow members!
Tejal, this is really quite beautiful to read. Very stirring and heartfelt. I agree with Juma, for someone of your age, this is an incredible piece of writing and I very much look forward to reading more of your work.
I’m glad you enjoyed the story! Let’s all get ready with our pens for the next contest/event 🙂
Hi Tejal, I was totally moved while reading your story. And I learned many things from it, like: keeping and taking care of a flower is like taking care of someone you love – even though you gave everything, you do everything but if both of you are not meant to be, it doesn’t work and the more you push, the more you hurt each other so the best way is to let go. Learning to let go of something which is not destined to be yours is not easy, the process is always painful but it is for the BETTER. Like taking care of crocus, it is destined to be where it belongs, it is not destined to be yours to keep. Excellent writing! Good job:-)
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Such a beautiful story. I loved how the description painted a clear picture that fit the plot. Congratulations, Tejal!