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The Fisherman and the Sea
Under Pink Blossoms
Green Choices
Inspirare
The Spookfest
Adieu
Attitudes
The Missing Candies
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The Magic Moment
Give Me Wings So I Might Fly
Whistle Twice for Yes
The Last Pilgrimage
The Inhabitants
Lord What Fools These Mortals Be
Unwanted
Escape to Paradise
The Problem with Women
Meg in Her Bath
Endure and Sing
People First, software second - Since 1985...
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleEven though the idea for the story was good, I’d like to point out something that stood out to me the most – your use of punctuation marks. The exclamation mark emphasized whenever the character’s thoughts seemed more crucial and more emotional, while the ellipsis that accompanied the one-sentenced paragraph colored the story correctly. A lot of time the punctuation marks appear when they shouldn’t and I’m glad to see that this… Read more »
Thank you Katy, I really appreciate your input. How can one improve if he/she doesn’t receive the type of constructive, useful criticism which is so necessary to anyone (not just an author)? This helps me to look at my stories from a different and more objective angle. I do love some of my characters more than others so I really appreciate the help readers could give me by looking at them through… Read more »
It brings tears to my eyes to see someone with such love for their characters. I hope you continue writing with such passion!
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