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The Fisherman and the Sea
Under Pink Blossoms
Green Choices
Inspirare
The Spookfest
Adieu
Attitudes
The Missing Candies
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The Magic Moment
Give Me Wings So I Might Fly
Whistle Twice for Yes
The Last Pilgrimage
The Inhabitants
Lord What Fools These Mortals Be
Unwanted
Escape to Paradise
The Problem with Women
Meg in Her Bath
Endure and Sing
People First, software second - Since 1985...
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI love, love, love this story! In a few deft words, you’ve painted a new portrait of a man many of us first learned about in high school – quite a character, this one! Through your clever writing, we see his attraction to the ladies, his trouble with bailiffs, his way with servants, his outwardly respectable life which doesn’t quite mesh with his inner thoughts! I love the way you use the… Read more »
Thank you so much for your comprehensive comments. I am not sure if you were also a writer on the “zen garden club” site, so maybe worth adding that there were also constraints of lavender, a picket fence and a grandma that had to be incorporated into Pepys’s day. Fun, fun.
Oh wow – I wasn’t a zen garden club writer, so I clicked on the pink box above your story and it showed me all the old zen garden prompts. Now I see what you mean. It might be helpful to other people who read your story to see that prompt: lavender flowers reach above the picket fence – Grandma is watching Now I’m even more impressed with the way you worked… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAfter writing 11 stories this year to those prompts from various flowers and haikus, I found myself enjoying working within the restrictions, preferring that to the single word themes….but needs must, so I keep having a go.
I really enjoyed how you made history come alive, Susan. Looking forward to more of your stories on the new site 🙂
Thank you. Never sure how well English history travels, especially after my daughter said she had never heard of Samuel Pepys, which was pretty incredible considering she has a history degree!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI loved the writing style; a story in diary format. Learnt a lot.
Ha ha. As long as you know grandma isn’t actually in the annals of English history
Hi Susan, I am often amazed at all the different styles of writing we have here in the Voice Club, you can actually see, given the time, the person/s behind the writing, and that adds to the story. I see you having a very active imagination, (always thinking how?) you really love expressing all of your feelings, have this inner drive, and love the beauty in nature and what you see around… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you. I enjoyed lavender month.
Hi, Susan. Congratulations on this one. You always have a clever writing style. Hope to read more stories from you here in Voice club.
I haven’t thought of writing in a diary format, but after reading your story I will certainly try it! It feels more realistic and authentic. It is after all a biography, a personal testimony, that shows the character’s feelings and thoughts.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHa ha. Of course I was copying the style of Samuel Pepys but you could be a modern diarist.
And thank you, Susan, for sharing your wonderful story with us and inspiring us to try out something different.
Hello Susan. How nice that you are the Featured Voice on the new Stars page. You’ve always been one of the writers I admired most, so I decided to go back and read all of your stories again. This one is one of my favorites. It is exceedingly clever, and accurately portrays the man, his writing style and his period of time. Congratulations for being featured! Our new members will enjoy reading… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow, Fuji, thanks for alerting me to my ‘15 minutes of fame’. I have been AWOL recently on a project taking up my time but I must write something before all the deadlines pass.
Congratulations for being featured, Susan.
Thank you.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Susan – Congrats on being a featured voice star! I have also been AWOL, but now glad to return to the Voice Club. I had writers block recently, but now really hope to get back to writing. After checking your star page, and all your wonderful stories, I got some new inspiration! Thanks ?
Sweet comment, thanks.