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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHow poignant! You tell so much of the story of the boy’s descent into a demoralised pre-teen existence, and in so few words. Very thought -provoking story
Thank you, Susan. Most of this story developed in my brain during a sleepless night. The next morning I was afraid it was too dark, but I’m glad I decided to send it in.
Lovely story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you. I am glad you thought so.
“When dark descends and the orchard is draped in black…” This particular phrase paints an incredible scene in all the readers’ minds.
Thank you. I’m glad you recognize and appreciated the overarching sadness in the story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleSo, so sad, evoking memories of those childhood events that devastate yet ultimately shape you. I just want to reach out and hug him as I am sure his poor mother did! Thank you for a beautiful story.
We are all shaped by our childhood events. The hope is that the positive events will outweigh the ones that devastate. Thank you for reading and commenting on my story.
It is one I am proud of.
This is a very touching story, you get the feeling of a boy who is forced to grow up too quickly. Nicely written.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Carrie, for reading my story. One never knows when an acquaintance has had to grow up too quickly. Thank you for the comments.
“To a 10-year old boy’s soul, this is the ultimate betrayal…” This perfectly describes how I felt when my brother would report my bad deeds to my mother, as a child. You have represented the boy’s mind perfectly. Keep it up!
Thank you, Eden, both for reading my story and for the positive comments. Hopefully, you and your brother have grown into a positive relationship, void of betrayals!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello Susan, I don’t think that I could comment any further on what has already been said, except to say that I admire your bravery in telling this story. Wonderfully written and expressed.
Hello Susan. I’d not read your story before but just listened to your recording. What stayed with me was the young boy’s loss of innocence and his mother’s sadness. Not an easy subject to write about but you handled it brilliantly. And I really enjoyed hearing you read it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA wonderfully written coming of age story – tender and tragic. Your audio presentation made it even better. You have the perfect voice for reading these stories – hope you do many more!
Thanks for your positive comments. I hope to do more readings in the future; hopefully at a bit slower pace.
Hi Susan, I enjoyed your audio recording of this story. It’s been a treat to hear a new voice. This story still touches my heart.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI agree with Carrie, Susan. Your story, especially told in your own voice, goes straight to the heart. Thanks for taking the time to record it.
Thank you, Julie, for your comments and your encouragement. I hope to write and record others in the future.
Thank you, Carrie, for your kind words. It means a lot to me to know that others can be touched by my words. Thanks again for reading and commenting on my story,
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