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It takes a real talent to tell a story in so few words. What was…
Endure and Sing
Inspirational piece. Am glad you picked the rat to be the protagonist in your story,…
Endure and Sing
Such a sweet tale - and with a good moral to the story. I thought…
Endure and Sing
Wow! This is a good story! Really good to read to little kids, the moral…
Endure and Sing
Hi Katy, it really does add an extra dimension to hear your story read aloud…
Endure and Sing
In my neighboring country Denmark, we have the classical storyteller Hans-Christian Andersen. Your sweet story…
Endure and Sing
A really nice one with a wonderful story line. I can see why this was…
Endure and Sing
A beautiful story! I was reminded of seeing Paul Potts and Susan Boyle on Britain's…
Endure and Sing
Your story inspired me to keep going no matter how discouraging it gets. At times…
Endure and Sing
Thank you so much for the feedback! I pray that the young readers will be…
Endure and Sing
Thank you for taking the time to comment and convey your thoughts on the story.…
Endure and Sing
Hi Katy, don't we all feel like the rat in your story at times! We…
Vows
I must admit it was the picture of the church, with its grave yard, under…
Between Belonging and Dying
A very powerful story, Daniel. Your writing makes it easy to feel the reality of…
Between Belonging and Dying
Oh my gosh, Daniel. Your story really defines the word superb. You make me experience…
Between Belonging and Dying
A horrendous situation, more so because so many people find themselves going through it. A…
Between Belonging and Dying
What an extremely powerful story Daniel, really well written and with an ending that had…
Between Belonging and Dying
Daniel, this story is one of the best flash fiction stories I've ever read. You…
In Memoriam
It's terrible to lose someone you love and accept that he is not a part…
The Problem with Women
I think Carrie has said it all. We rest our collective case. ?
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Bittersweet with goosebumps and tissues – great story, Mary ❤️
Thank you Sandra.
This beautifully written story brought tears to my eyes. I’d like to think that the letters and imagining the apple tree in all seasons helped make Amelie’s life easier, in spite of her illness. Can you tell us what the title means in English? I looked it up, but there were several interpretations. What does it mean to you, as the author? It’s a memorable title, by the way.
Tu me manques translates to I miss you in English. It is one of those sentences that seem twisted to us. We would read it as, you are missed by me. I am glad you liked the story. If I was in Amalie’s situation, I am sure I would appreciate the chance to escape in my imagination from monitors and blank walls. Thank you for your kind comments.
What a beautifully crafted story of friendship. I think it is probably the wish of most young people with a terminal illness to not be seen as different, and having a pen friend would have granted that to Amelie. A sad but satisfying read.
Thank you Carrie for your kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed the story. As you say, for those people with a terminal illness, being able to leave some things hidden is sometimes more important than telling all.
Letters always leave us with so much warmth and something to hold on to. Loved your story emphasizing this fact.
Thank you. Letters enabled Amelie to glimpse a life other than the one she owned.
What a lovely way to show and describe that part of human nature that surpasses suffering. Thank you Mary, you wrote this wonderfully.
Thank you for your wonderful comments Eric. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my story.
This story brought me great pain while I was reading it. However, sadness is a part of life and so the tears caused by this writing are quite fitting. Well done on a great story!
Thank you Katy. I consider any story that moves a person to be a success. Thank you for your lovely comments.
I love it, Mary. It brings my tears falling. You portray the true meaning of friendship in this story. Well done.
Thank you Lotchie. I am glad it moved you.
You’re welcome, Mary.